Focusing on falling and missing the ground
Little Johnny jumped into the air
Yet gravity had other ideas
Fly (an acrostic poem)
Never Short On Words
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Focusing on falling and missing the ground
Little Johnny jumped into the air
Yet gravity had other ideas
Abdi Mohammed
The Art of Prose and Poetry
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Sarah Torribio and her right brain. Music. Musings. Writing. Style.
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Never Short On Words 
I felt like your use of brevity in this poem, really heightened (hehe) its meaning. it gave it a sense of immediacy that felt remiscent of the hyperactiveness of childhood. I really enjoyed the whole peice.
Thank you so much. It had to be shorter since it was so late at night, and I had to get to bed. lol
I wouldn’t have guessed that it was happenstance that caused the brevity choice, it excellently served its subject in this work, which I really enjoy! I hope you keep writing selfishly, because it serves a calming meditative purpose for me, previously unmet by any other author!
Nice! Thank you so much. It reall means a lot to me to hear that.
Glad I could help! And thank you for your work!